EggstraCake's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[He Crashed Artanes]

Wow still better than 99% of newgrounds haha

Pretty good for 20 mins of work

glimpee responds:

Thanks :)

[Second Chance]

@Mitch, EpicNorriS, and Talemir

Mitch and EpicNorriS both seem to mis-comprehend the meaning of Talemir's review, and I frankly agree with him. This is a mediocre animation with a good idea. The execution is what could be better. Small things like when the blue robot is walking, and his feet kind of slide back instead of holding where they are like something real would, is important. Plus, there is too much using of the same model, and the entire animation seems 2-Dimentional. Like when the robot uses his rocket-feet, his left foot is DIRECTLY in front of his right foot, and it's just too 2-D. If Plus the FPS is bad, so you didn't really work that out.

Plus, you should never talk down to or demean your viewers, thats how you lose them.

hrechkaness responds:

I'm trying to grow out of childish responses from my teen years. I believe everyone is entitled to their opinion and I think all animations will have their fair share of spam or abusive reviews. I choose to ignore hatemail and try to focus on the ones that are constructive and concise. When I see a reviewer trying to make a just point while undermining my work and Newgrounds it is a bit frustrating. I know he was trying to make a couple key points of things I could have worked on but he strayed too far away from them for the review to be received as constructive. I addressed the comments I had a problem with and responded to them. If his true intent was suggestions for improvement then I would have never responded the way I did. I value my viewers and am thankful for anyone who has taken the time to view my work. Thank you for watching and I appreciate your input!

[The Cheese Dance]

Sorry

I hate this anime crap

Please work on a more individual type of artwork

Anime/manga bullshit doen't look good, unless you are AMAZING, but then it still looks lazy and crap.

supersysscvi responds:

I will concede the anime influence in this piece, and I will concede it as a kind of bullshit since this is based on someone else's product, but I would like to point out that my style reflects a more ameturish cartoon than anime. Even so, I put consideration to how I drew each piece, yet I'm not certain if my product is a true reflection of what I had aimed for. Despite trying my hardest for it not to be so, I shall concede that this is a sort of bullshit, according to Harry Frankfort's "On Bullshit." (1986)

In the future, I shall try to work on a more original art style. It may still seem like a cartoon, but I won't deny that influence. I shall thank you, as this response has been more promising than I could have hoped for.